been wanting a sequel to h6 (producers cut) but i know that wont happen so i did one myself, its diffenatly not completed but its progressing everyday. its more of a direct sequel to h20 if anything, i wrote it as ressurection never happened. let me know what you guts think… i got copyrights to this so dont think about takeing them lol :
Untitled “Halloween” concepts
Characters:
John Strode- the “Ahab” character. Pays homage to Dr. Loomis, more or less plot device. Investigating the murder of his mother Laurie strode not convinced she committed suicide. Believes after doing research of the crime scene evidence that the whole thing is a cover up by the cult of “thorn”.
Michael Myers- after escaping “the Hill Crest Academy Murders” Michael is drawn by “thorn” to finish Laurie and return home. Taking back his stab wounded, blood stained jump suit along the way. Done cleverly, don’t want to give too much action away. Perhaps have a scene of coroners are about to open up the body bag and notice its already open with nude headless corpse of Laurie’s victim on a bloody stretcher. Michael takes stolen ambulance car back to Illinois and breaks in to police county evidence room to recover his half burnt, slightly chard mask (JC H1 mold) from the night he came home, his bloody tears run down the mask face. On the way back to Haddonfield Michael is picked up by the cult. And vanishes until the next cycle of thorn continues.
Dr. Loomis- is only portrayed through memories or narrative monologs and or visions. The heart and soul of this project. Want to use a memory scene and have Loomis unlock some secret but don’t know what yet, possible information of what happened to him between the events of curse and H20.
Stephen Myers aka Bryan Eldridge- now a seventeen year old student to a nearby sister town of Haddonfield called Russellville. Under the name Bryan eldridge and unaware of his past he is now an adopted child of jerry and Pam eldridge. Stalked by Dr. Terrence Wynn (the man in black). Pays homage to Laurie but not have him the main focus of story. Truth is uncovered at end after a john strode (Loomis type) rescue.
Dr. Terrence Wynn- the “big brother” of the second act. The watcher of potential victims. Use as “the voice of Michael” but only “come to me” and “kill for him” references.
Story outline
Michael walks away from the murder scenes of hill crest academy. Drives to the institution were Laurie is being held. Will not have the death of Laurie in this. Instead Michael pulls up to the asylum gets out and stares at Laurie’s window (foreshadow her death). Michael returns home to pick up his mask. He then hides away with thorn through underground corridors of his basement which leads to the new cult sanctuary. Lies dormant until next cycle of thorn, possibly ten yrs later. In that time we meet john strode now a federal agent of investigation. Who is not convinced that his mother just ended it all with a jump off the roof. Good area to work on character development and Loomis memories as research of his mother’s death is unearthed.
We also meet Bryan Eldridge getting ready to go to school being stalked by man in black. He feels wanted yet alone, as if people knew more about his past and he doesn’t know it.
Knowing that Michael is still missing john goes to Haddonfield out of the obsession and the knowing that the cult thorn exist.
John now knows that Bryan (Steven Myers) is linked to all this he goes in search of him.
Michael is now under the surge of thorn and goes out on samhain in hopes to retrieve his son.
John comes in for rescue and finds out that he knows more than Bryan in all this. And in heart does not tell him…
Have Michael escape,
Act 1 scene 1
Opening credits with JC’s Halloween theme
Open up with point of view shot of Michael’s eyes looking through trees and foliage at the crime scene of Laurie’s decapitated victim she thought was her brother.
The shape watches as EMT’s leave the area.
Begin JC’s The Hedge score:
EMT #1 “like why Halloween you know? Got enough problems in the world today, and now we got this “Michael mania” sweeping across the country” the shape still lurks as the EMT zips up the headless officer’s body bag
EMT #2 “it’s no joke you know this guy has killed over seventy people, this guy won’t die, and he even escaped tonight”!
EMT #1 “Hey! How do you know that? Who says it’s not some other psycho just doing his work huh”?
EMT #2 opens hatched door to ambulance and pulls up stretcher. “Whoever he is, he close. Let’s just hope our boys in blue can get this son of bitch”.
EMT #1 scoffs “yah, hopefully” closes the door. “Hey want to wait inside while I have smoke yah”?
EMT #2 “ha from the way my nights goin, I could have one right about now” he stumbles up to the passenger side.
P.O.V still going:
EMT #1 turns away from the wind and strikes a match; as soon as the shape see’s the light he begins his first step
Begin JC’s the shapes stalks Laurie score:
The Shape slowly trekking his way towards the EMT. The EMT’s smoke drifts into the moonlit sky. P.o.v follows the smoke into the sky as Michael sees it drift by the moon. P.o.v down back to EMT and the Shape gets closer. P.o.v looks down at a rock lying in bloody grass. Michael’s hand reaches out for it and picks it up and focuses on creeping up to his next victim. Michael stops, score stops, hear Michael’s heavy breathing, p.o.v of head tilt.
Voice of Thorn “Kill for him”!
P.o.v of arm rising over his head with rock in hand. Blood drips from rock.
The Shape grunts as he strikes the EMT on the head with the rock and his body falls to the ground. The shape takes a couple steps over the body as blood rushes out off a massive gash on the back of his head. EMT’s hand moves slightly to pick himself back but Michael gives two more grizzly blows to the back of his head grunting each time.
Cut to EMT #2 waiting for co-working to get in the van. Radio is playing patsy cline’s three cigarettes in the ashtray.
EMT #2 “yah three cigarettes is how many this guys is smoking, ha, where is he”? He hears the back doors open up again. “Hey, you riding in the back with this one? Huh? Hey Rick! What’s going on now”? The van jumps as if someone got out. “That’s enough of this now” he gets out of the van “Hey rick, we gotta go here”. He abruptly stops as he looks in the back to see the bloody bag on the stretcher ripped open with blood all in the interior walls, floor and ceiling. And the headless body of the officer still strapped down, but with his clothes missing, the jumpsuit was gone.
Close up of EMT’s eyes looking all over the scene in horror and begins to step back and stumps the back of his heel over the torso of Rick’s corpses, the back of his head is beaten, bloody and mangled.
Begin the last .37 seconds JC’s the Hedge score:
Birds eye over head view of van, EMT #2 looking around in disbelief and Rick. Pan up and slowly move to view the full moon and fade away.
Scene 2
October 28th
11 years later
JC’s cut it out score: wide low angel shot of a quite narrow side road were lights break out from the trees. An FBI Interceptor drives towards camera. Cut away to two men in the car. The driver flicks his Zippo open and lights a cigarette.
Driver “so let me ask you… what is it, detective John… Tate right”?
John Strode “no (grins) not for a few years now, I’m surprised they haven’t changed it yet… annoyed more or less” he slightly smiles.
Driver “Well detective john strode, what got you into homicide? (Coughs) not everyone’s cup of tea”
John strode “you can just say that on one night, I got used to seeing what we see every day and I want it to end. There are things out there that don’t make this world go round detective riley… I want those things to be locked away” he looks out the window.
Detective Riley “if that’s not an honest answer. Let’s go get some coffee”
John strode “lets, oh and your story”?
Detective riley “it pays well and I don’t have to deal with customers”.
John strode “honest answers”.
Detective riley “honest answers”. Both smile and car drives out of sights into the night. Camera pans up to the star lit sky. Subconscious hint the constellation of thorn in the stars.
Scene 3
Begin Halloween 4: the Return of Michael Myers them reprise 1 min: the next morning. Wide center angle shot of a white one story house. Autumn leaves scatter in the choppy wind. Pan to the left of a highway surrounded by meadows and plains of wheat and tall grass protected by a forest by a dark dead forest, the trees skeletal branches stick out like reaching arms. Cut to a big rig driving towards camera through the morning fog. The eighteen wheeler drives by and we barely see a “silver shamrock” logo on the side, following the truck the camera pans to the right revealing the other side of the road. There is a green wooden sign standing posted that reads…
Now Leaving
Haddonfield
In gold paint. Cut to an old earthly and decaying cemetery, just showing the gothic headstones silhouettes with the sun breaking out behind them.
Begin Alan howarth birth ceremony theme:
Each headstone coming into view, an angel and crosses of all shapes and sizes begin to light up. But one shape steps into view. The boogeyman walks aimlessly towards the camera, only showing his shape, shadow, and silhouette. Fog rolls by the shapes knees. Michael gets closer and larger into frame, his image of 6’ 6” beast under a trance.
Cut to a couple hiking along a pumpkin patch that runs along the highway west towards California, towards… Laurie. The couple walks up to a rest stop were there is an old brown van with a rusty camper parked; the door is open, swinging slightly in the wind.
Girl hiker “hey I got to go bathroom, and then we should walk back yah”?
Boy hiker “sounds good”. She starts to jog towards the van. Steady cam p.o.v of her. She begins to pass by the van when she notices inside the open door keys are on the seat, a ripped and bloody backpack torn on the passenger side and that the driver side window is broken, she gasps in shock.
Begin Halloween 3: Season of the Witch main theme form .00-.25 .07 secs in, she yells.
Girl hiker “Tom”!
Tom “yes love”! She runs towards him in panicking, trying her best to stay calm.
Tom “what’s wrong”? He grabs her shoulders.
Girl hiker “we need to go back and talk to someone, someone is hurt, there’s blood in the car”!
Tom “ok let’s go”. They dash back the trail.
Fade from .25 to Halloween 3: season of witch chariots of pumpkins theme. As the hikers run down the trail camera pans left past the van and towards the back of the rest stop. There are two men in a struggle. The shapes large dark shadow holds and man in a bear hold. We just see the shapes hand over the man’s mouth holding it shut as he pulls the man into the shadows. The man reaches out as it disappears into the darkness. Cut to low wide angle shot of highway as the old van drives by the camera blowing leaves into frame and off into the distance. Camera shifts to the right towards rest stop, an old dead oak tree comes into the right side of frame with the man hanging from it. End “Chariots of Pumpkins” theme.
October 29th
Scene 4