H3 Novel - From a short novel to a longer story.

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Ok guys here I will post up my new H3 novel, part after part so you can comment the parts separate. Well I know my english isnt the best but I think you can read this and understand it without a problem anyway.

So like what I just wrote. It will come up in parts and here is the first part.

Part one.

“For over fifteen years I tried to help him, for over fifteen years I try to understand him. I meet him every day for fifteen years and nothing changed accept one thing, his eyes. They became darker and darker every day until it was nothing left but pure evil. You can’t help anyone that dosn’t want to be helpt, you can’t help anyone thats not human.” // Samuel L. Loomis.

The rain is pouring down the big windows down the hallways, the darkness has one more time fall over Smith’s Grove Sanitarium. A icecold wind flys over the ears of Barbara Collier who just leave her car in a hurry and now she’s running toward the entrence door to Smith Grove in the middle of the rain. Indoors Somebody is screaming and its no time to waste, as fast as Barbara enterings the Sanitarium she runs to the room where the screams is coming from. Before she opens the door she takes a deep breath, she opens it . Laurie Strode is sitting on the floor with a broken piece of glas in her hand, she holds the glas so hard that’s a pool of her own blood starts to appear on the floor beneath her hand. By the side of Laurie Nurse Pamela Hawkings is lying with a cut in her throuth, a cut that was created by the broken glas piece in Laurie’s hand. Pamela Hawkings had a mission that night to put Laurie to bed, it worked out good until Laurie was asking for a glas of water. Now Pamela is lying there in a pool of her own blood struggle to survive. Barbara freezes of fear when she sees it but she knows that she must take the glas piece from Lauries so she slowly starts to walk forward to her, She helps her up to her fet and takes the glas piece from her, in a second Laurie collapse.

That was the 31th october 2010.

To be a psycholog is not the easiest job on the planet, think about it for a second every day you must sit down and listen to all the peoples problem. Always be understanding and always be there for everybody that you work with. Laurie Strode meet her psycholog in the winter of 2007 the same year as her mental sick brother came back after 15 years and tried to kill her. As you might understand thats a reason why Laurie is where she is today alone in a tiny little cell for psychic scared persons. Laurie barely survived the attack, she had a angel by her side. She tried to fight through the day for two years until she reunited with her brother one more time, after that it was no turning back from what he helped her to become. She become lost inside herself, started to see the most terrifying things you can imagine.
Laurie Strode has meet her psycholog every day for four years now, where of two years has been inside the Sanitarium. Today it is time again for another meeting between her and her psycholog, Laurie is sitting in front of a table and starring down her empty mug in a big white room. Across the table her psycholog Barbara Collier is sitting with a tape recorder, it will recording the whole meeting.

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  • So how do you feeling today. Barbara asked and looked through the window at the other side of the room. It was a sunny day in the beginning of the fall, the first leaf has just fall down to grown.

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  • I don’t really know how to feel. Laurie answer and rub her tired eyes.

Barbara was not very suprised of that depressing answer, she let her eyes go from the window and now she is looking at Lauries long blond hair.

  • Last time you wash your hair, when was it?

Laurie pull her hand through her dirty worn hair.

  • If I gonna me honest with you, I don’t really know, but my hair?. What has that to do with any of this? I thought you where here to help me heal. Not wash my hair?

Thats a good question, is the hair so important? do you really need to take care of it when you are locked in from the society?

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  • Laurie its a lot easier to take care of exterior, its take about five minutes to wash your hair but it can take a lifetime to wash out your inre. But you must start somewhere don’t you? Barbara answer Lauries question.

It became silent in the room for about a minute, it was a long minute. Only one thing was making a noice and that was the recorder that was lying on the table between those two.

  • But if I don’t have anything to wash out then? what if I’m empty inside? Laurie asked and flip her mug over.
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Very good !

Just a question, Barbara is the psycholog in H2?

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thank u:) yes she is.

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Is halloween6 the only one who read this?, come on guys let me know if you waiting for part 2? if you don’t let me know that too :slight_smile:

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Part 2!! :smiley:

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Here is part 2 for the people who cares:P

Laurie was sitting on her bed in her room, it was in the middle of the night. She couldnt sleep very well, it was not often she sleept at all. Behind her door she could hear the staff talking, they used to go around the big hallways and check so everything was ok. She couldnt know what the time was becuse she didnt have a clock in her room, talk about escaping from reality. For some people the cell became a lonly place at night but not for Laurie she usually had her mother to talk to, the strange thing was that she where dead. Her mother used to tell storys about when Laurie and Michael lived together, back when Laurie only where a little baby. How only he could make her smile and how much she meant to him.

  • You know how much we love you Angel? Her mother asked her when she enterd the room from other no where.
    Laurie closed her eyes and swallow some air before she answer’d her.
  • Yes mom, I do know that. When she opened up her eyes again her mom where sitting on the bed beside of her reached for Lauries hand.
  • Hold my hand please my little girl.
    They where sitting in bed and hold eacother hands for a while, no one said a word. Her mother started to smile and told Laurie that Halloween was coming soon and that Michael was coming to take her home, after that she disappeared.

The fallowing day was a monday and every monday Barbara and Laurie eat breakfast together, it was good way to talk and they started to talk about the night and if Laurie had sleep well even though Barbara already knew the answer.

  • Look Barbara why do you come here?, you are asking me the same fucking question every monday morning? Laurie answer frustrated and look’d confused, she push’d away her chair that she was sitting on. Stands up and lean over the table.
  • Why are you doing this? Why do you not just leave me in here to rot? She contiuned while her tears started to run down her cheeks
  • No thats not true Laurie, I do care about you and I would never leave you alone in here. Barbara said and try’d to calm her down so she also stands up and look’d concerned in to Lauries eyes.
  • Yeah and you told me two years ago that you never would send me away to this place, I’m so fucking tired of your lies! Laurie screams to Barbara and trys to leave the dinner room but she got stop’d by a security gaurd.
  • Sorry but you can’t leave the room in that mood you are in right now Laurie. He told her and blocked the door.
  • Not in this mood? What is the right mood then?
    Laurie answerd the gard and falls down on her knees, meanwhille Barbara stands at the table and can only watch on how Laurie totaly breaks down in tears but she wasnt the only one who cry’d at that moment, Lee Brackett where sitting alone in his house at that moment with a photograf of his dead dougther Annie and a bottle of alcohol in his other hand. He ha’d cry for hours that overcast morning, Slowly its started to rain outside and a long hard day ha’d just begun for both of them.
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That’s really good.

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I love part 2 :smiley:

I hope that Michael has come back^^

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Thanks guys I appreciate and Halloween6 what can I say who knows?:wink:

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October 28 2011.

Somewhere in deepast woods outside hoddenfield some one where walking around, the grown was fild of leafs and water. All the threes had diffrents colours and the rain was pouring down from the sky. It was time for this man who walk’d around to find a place to stay over the night, a white dove where sitting in one of the trees over him and look’d down over him. The Shape had walk around in the woods for several years, ecaping from the society and just waited for the right moment to come back for his baby sister, Lauries mother maybe only where a hallucination but Michael Myers where all to real. He had come back from the dead and this time he would not fail with his mission.
The dove spread out its wings and fly’d away over Michael, he look’d up at the dove and started to follow it. Where the dove a hallucination in Michaels head like his mother or where it just a coincidence?

Outside the Smiths Grove at the parkinglot Lee Brackett was standing with his umbrella up high in the air, smelling his own breath. He could still taste and smell the alcohol. Only one thing was in his mind at that moment, Laurie Strode she had become like his own child through out the years so he feel that he was guilty to paid her a visit once in a while actually he where one of the few who took the time for it. When he lose’d his doughter Annie he brok’d down totaly, he stop work as the Sheriff of Haddonfield police station and insteed the started to drink. The only thing he had left where Laurie.
He look’d over to the sanitarium and started to walk against it, it was nice for him to come indoors his hands was shaking after the icecold rain outside you could really feel that the fall has start’d now. In another room at the sanitarium Laurie where sitting at a dinner table and tried to eat, it where hard for her becuse she often start’d to throw up when she tried to eat. She playd with a corn on the plate with her plastic fork, she let’d go of the fork and look’d out through a window and started to daydream like she use’d to do.

Mason and Cynthia Strode where Lauries dead foster-parents and in this daydream they all three walk’d togheter over a beautiful green meadow and hold eachother hands. Mason and Cynthia told Laurie that they loved verry much. They sitt’d down in the grass and it was a happy moment to remember, to bad it just was a daydream. Laurie started to cry when she realzed that they where dead and the person who killed them where her brother. After a while when her tears had run down her face she forced herself to eat up. After that the next thing she did where to throw in the toilet room.

The time was Half past two and Laurie and Brackett where going to have their meeting, Bracklett where early so he had to wait for her a couple of minutes. The visit room where a booring room with only the colour white over it. He where sitting at a table and scratch’d his beard.
Brackett really hated the music who they play’d in that room, he could’t understand how that music was supose to calm people dowm. The door opened and Laurie walk’d in to the room looking at Bracklett.

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You have a good idea.
I think Michael will appear in the visions of laurie

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glad u like it :slight_smile:

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I like what I read to an extent, but unfortunately I cant get past the part of Laurie speaking, I dont know I just felt she would not speak anymore, however obviously this is more interesting than her NOT speaking…because there is only so much you can do with that.

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Yeah that was one of the problem when I deside to write this, its hard becuse if u gonna look at it a realistic way Laurie should keep her mouth shut after H2 but then again like u said if she did it would way harder to come up with a story and make it intresting.

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Ok its been a while now, I’m sorry for that I have been busy with some stuff. Girlfriends you know hehe :sunglasses:

well here is part 4, hope you guys like it:)

It was hard for both Laurie and Brackett to say something during the time they both where sitting together in the room. Usually they didnt have a problem to talk with each other but when its starting to get close to Halloween Laurie always become more silents, she looked with her tired eyes at him and yawn’d.

  • Are you tired? Brackett asked her with a unsure smile on his face before Laurie closed her eyes and lean back on her chair.
  • At this point you should know that the word “tired” for me is a lifestyle, i been waiting for you for a while now. Where have you been? She ask him with a depressed voice.
    Brackett didnt have any good answer to her question, the last year he had became paranoi’d and imagine that Michael would come back. He could feel it in his heart. He couldt tell anyone about it becuse who would care about a drunk like him? he would end up in a cell just like Laurie.
  • I’m sorry sweetie but you know how hard it is for me this time of year.
    Lauries face turned from a tired face to a more angry and sad face when she heard what Brackett just told her, she couldt bearly hold herself from screaming to him.
  • Hard? For you? Yes you lose Annie two years ago but who’s fault was it?

At the same time as Laurie and Brackett where talking at the Sanitarium the dove that Michael follows landed under a stone bridge to take cover from the heavy rain thats had pour’d down the hole day, Michael sat down on the gravel under the bridge looking down at the water infront him where a vision of Laurie slowly started to appear. Two teens, one boy and one girl walk’d over the bridge at the same time and stold his attention from the vision of Laurie. When the two both start’d to argue over a party some days erilier Michael had enough of their present and deside to pay them a visit.
It where way to foggy and rainy for the both teens to see more then themself and the spot they where standing on.
While the boy was busy swearing to his partner a big shape appeard behind him from the fog, Michael grabed him by his hair and pull him backwords against him so he easily could pull his blade through the boys neck. The girl freezed of disbelief, just looking against this big man who now lets the boy go. His dead body slowly hit the grown in front of her. The white dove spread its wings out and fly away as a female scream thundered from the bridge and the rain continues to fall hard to the grown.

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the image u painted of michael coming out of the fog and grabbing that kid was amazing in my head haha
good work bro.

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thats awesome man, glad you like it :laughing:

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Ok here we go again : )
You know the deal, tell me what u think!

Brackett leaved Laurie with disbelieve in his eyes he could not belive what Laurie just had told him about Annie, that it was her fault that she died. In his mind it was Loomis fault that Michael came back and took his dougther away from him. Over the years Brackett had start’d to love Laurie just as much as loved Annie. It where very hard for him to understand what Laurie had became over the last two years, he didnt wanted to see it that way. In his eyes she still where the cute little babysitter who everybody loved.
He sat down on a chair outside the room where they had talk for about twenty minutes, he pull’d his hand trough his long hair and a deep sigh went out from him.

Barbara came down the hallway and saw Brackett sitting on the chair, she could see in his eyes that something was wrong, more wrong than usually so she walked up to him and ask him if he wanted to talk about Laurie over a cigarette outside the Sanitarium. Fill the lungs with poison was not a problem for Brackett, he had nothing left to lose in his life so why should he care about himself and beside from that the rain had stop’d outside for the moment.

Barbara lighted up her and Bracketts cigarette’s as they started to discuss Laurie’s status, it was not very much good news about her, it was almost not any news at all to be honest.
She also told him that she become more and more like her brother.
Brackett breathed in a lot of smoke and blew it out again.

  • Don’t you even compare Laurie and Him when I’m around!. He bellowed to Barbara with a disgusted face. He could handle talking about Michael Myers but to mentions that Laurie and he where family was way to much.
  • Laurie is not him, she is not him!. He continue and took another drag from his ciggarett.

Barbara blew out the smoke from her mouth and tried to calm him down a bit, she just wanted to discuss Laurie with someone who where close to her.
Barbara cared about Laurie just as much at Brackett did, she had became like a mother for her through out the years. She knew that it was wrong to get close to the inmates at the Sanitarium but she also knew that it was the only way to understand Laurie.

  • Halloween is coming soon, how do you think Laurie feels about that?.
    The reason why Barbara asked Brackett that question instead of asking Laurie was becuse Laurie hated to talk about Halloween. Brackett throw his cigarett down to the grown and stomped on it.
  • I don’t want to talk about that day, but if this will help you. I do belive she dies inside when that holiday comes around the corner. He answer Barbara and walked away to his car.

Michael where standing under a tall tree looking up at the moon that lighted up the his unshaved face. He started to hear her mothers voice that told him that it where time soon, time to bring his babysister home. The dove came flying and sat down infront of him, he took his obsessed eyes away from the moon and look’d down on the white dove, he knew that the dove where going to show him the right way and he also knew that his mother was very proud of him.

The moon lighted up the streets of Haddonfield as Bracketts car stop’d outside the old Myers house, he could feel how the anger and sadness inside of him started to grow as he stared righ at the house. Suddenly he hear’d something from inside the house, in a couple of secunds Brackett had run out from the car and up to the front door of the house. He slowly put his hand at the handel and open’d the door.

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good! (as always^^)

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I’ll do my best for thoes who reads it. Let me know if something is missing or could been better :tonqe: